A grim topic, but the poem was good. The "just once more" repetition effectively captured the addiction, I think. The flow of the poem was good, though it's slightly broken by the last line. A bit too many syllables in contrast with the line above--you could either shorten that one or lengthen the one above. Personally, I'd omit the "used to be" and replace it with "were." I'd also possibly cut out the "just;" it seems kind of randomly thrown in there.

So, it'd be something like "We all remember when you were nice."

It's your poem, though. Definitely don't take my word as the absolute necessity or anything.

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-I am the heavy wind the brings the storm; the gentle wind that strokes your tears; the steady wind that carries your sails...the calm wind that lifts your wings.

-Belief yields.

-Warning: I'm a terrible visual artist, save maybe photography.

I think that flows alot better, thank you! I couldn't quite figure out what to do with that line... so thank you very much!

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God never give us more than we can handle, but I think he assumes I'm stronger than what I really am.

I like this. jk. I LOVE THIS. It's so effective and now I feel that I need to talk to u about something. This relates a little too well to my life as of today. technically yesterday since it is 12:32 am here. anywho, back to the poem. I don't think the ending did your poem justice. It isn't quite effective. It seems like forced rhyme. other than that, it's perfect.
Gabby

It could work, its got possibilities.

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I'm always around, speak away!!! You got my AIM and I've got your number here somewhere. I love you Miss Gabby!!!

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God never give us more than we can handle, but I think he assumes I'm stronger than what I really am.

Very nicely written! I love the closing lines!

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